My Dates with the Dom by Eden Elgabri

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Denise Alicea

This blog was created by Denise in September 2008 to blog about writing, book reviews, and technology. Slowly, but surely this blog expanded to what it has become now, a central for book reviews of all kinds interviews, contests, and of course promotional venue for authors, etc

For Victoria Daniels, busy is an understatement. After her twenty year marriage dissolves, she goes back to law school and actively seeks a Dom to give her a sexual education. She meets Michael Manning online and they decide contractual sex would best serve their needs.

Michael Manning has a high powered career and family issues of his own. He needs a woman once a week to ease the stress. A woman who’ll obey his every command.
The two enter into a contract. One neither one of them is prepared for. But their weekly sex becomes addictive. What will happen when the contract is over? Will Michael be the Dom of Victoria’s dreams? Or turn into the love of a lifetime?

I really wanted to like this story.  But the characters, Victoria & Michael,  and the story are soft and underdeveloped.  I realize this is a novella, but it just seems so unexplained, unbelievable and not done with great detail.  Oh, and I found a typo.  The author shows potential in the foundation of her story.  I would just like to see more, more & more.

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